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It ended here. And I would've loved you forever, but forever came sooner than we ever could've imagined.

I couldn't take you down with me. You were my first, and now I'll be your last.
The beginning of the end happened here.

I can see the outline of your body buried in the ceiling,
As the windows begin to run red.
I miss the touch of your hand against my skin,
Even when it was always only cold.
I was just never any good at killing this feeling, so I hid it in the floor.

Now I feel you watch me from the walls.
The ghost of your breath sends shivers down my neck.
You whispered to me as I slept, "Forever is where it all goes wrong."
It echoes in my head, a memory of you in place of my heart.

This is where we met our end.
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ForestoFairies Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
human heart is a place of ghosts.
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Oxidizing-Angel Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2013
We're all haunted.
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nouseforaname17x Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
Well hello there stranger.
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Oxidizing-Angel Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
ohai
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HateFlash Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
I read it, I like it.

And I think I can understand what you mean by it :)
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Oxidizing-Angel Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
:) I'm curious, what do you gather from it?
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HateFlash Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2012
You killed your lover and buried him in the walls of your house.
So he'll be near you forever, watching you, so you can feel his breath.
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