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It ended here. And I would've loved you forever, but forever came sooner than we ever could've imagined.

I couldn't take you down with me. You were my first, and now I'll be your last.
The beginning of the end happened here.

I can see the outline of your body buried in the ceiling,
As the windows begin to run red.
I miss the touch of your hand against my skin,
Even when it was always only cold.
I was just never any good at killing this feeling, so I hid it in the floor.

Now I feel you watch me from the walls.
The ghost of your breath sends shivers down my neck.
You whispered to me as I slept, "Forever is where it all goes wrong."
It echoes in my head, a memory of you in place of my heart.

This is where we met our end.
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ForestoFairies Mar 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
human heart is a place of ghosts.
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:iconoxidizing-angel:
We're all haunted.
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:iconnouseforaname17x:
Well hello there stranger.
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:iconhateflash:
I read it, I like it.

And I think I can understand what you mean by it :)
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:iconoxidizing-angel:
:) I'm curious, what do you gather from it?
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:iconhateflash:
You killed your lover and buried him in the walls of your house.
So he'll be near you forever, watching you, so you can feel his breath.
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