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They said you were the wicked kind,
With danger in your smile.
They said that you had mastered time,
Could turn it something vile.
They said that you had seen it all,
Through mirrors in your eyes.
That you would push me up against the wall,
And kiss me to demise.
But that's the way I would've chosen,
To let you take me until I'm broken.

They said you were a cold one,
With a heart as dark as death.
From you no good could come,
That you would have my final breath.
But on your lips was fire,
Tamed and haunted.
Consumed by desire,
Their taste was all I wanted.

They said that you were broken,
For you the skies would never open.
So you burned it to the ground, with a deadly passion.
Pierced my heart with sound, an ember in the ashes.

They said that you were damned,
With a wound that would never heal.
They said my blood would stain the sand,
That there was nothing you wouldn't kill.

He's the wicked kind, they said,
With danger in his smile.
He won't miss you when you're dead,
But he'll hold you for a while.
“My dear, find what you love and let it kill you. Let it drain from you your all.
Let it cling onto your back and weigh you down into eventual nothingness.
Let it kill you, and let it devour your remains. For all things will kill you,
both slowly and fastly, but it’s much better to be killed by a lover.”


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hedonism47 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013
and to my lover-You don't know just how close you have come
great piece! For me, you could substitute "hate" for love in the poe,on any given day.
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xCha0tic1x Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2013
Well written, effectively written. Nicely done.
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Oxidizing-Angel Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
Thank you.
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xCha0tic1x Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2013
You're welcome :-)
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LFF2 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this! I love creepy things. Great job!! ^-^
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Oxidizing-Angel Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Thank you :)
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LFF2 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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HateFlash Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Very good, sends shivers down my spine.

Creepy and so true.
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Oxidizing-Angel Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2013
Thank you.
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